Thursday, April 17, 2008

Lost in the Deciduous Forest

Rainbow wrote a story in school this week. The topic was "lost in the (blank)" and she selected the deciduous forest. I couldn't even pronounce it correctly! Here's her story, with her own spelling and punctuation:

Taz and Rainbow where in their car and they had their windows opened. The din't know the door was unlocked! While they where playing they fell out into the deciduous forest! When they first got there a grop of anmals croued them. They felt kind-of scared.

After they stayed there for a little bit they got uesed to it. They heard birds chirping and hawks crowing. Deer came and cirlced around them. Squirrles came and jouned the deer. Taz was a little bit scared but Rainbow was up and dancing to the chirping and crowing.

Taz said... "What are you doing?" Rainbow said... I'm dancing. Taz said... "Stop it right now." But she did not stop. Then Taz jouined in. They stayed there for there hole life.

Now Rainbow and Taz are not scared. Now the animals hunted. They got Taz and Rainbow stake every day and night. Taz and Rainbow shared the food. Taz and Rainbow found water and showed the animals.

One night they had a feast. Rainbow and Taz danced all night long.

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In the "about the author" section, Rainbow described herself as "adventurous, friendly and funny." She also said her favorite food is "macuroney."

OMG that child is hilarious.

2 comments:

TriGirl 40 said...

Too precious - and so precocious! I love it!

(I think some of your zumbaing may have worn off on Rainbow.)

Jenn said...

Hawks crowing? :-)